Constructive Criticism is welcome
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Accelleron




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PostPosted: Sun, 26th Jun 2005 07:57    Post subject: Constructive Criticism is welcome
Well, despite the truckloads of bullshit contributed by various trolls, this forum is probably the biggest source of criticism I have on the web. So, here is my latest photoshop - a logo for my World of Warcraft guild. Tell me what you honestly think should be fixed, what is fine, and what should entirely be scrapped. Be objective, I am not looking for "17 4r3 t3h suXxX0rz".



EDIT: alternative version


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D_A_Kuja
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PostPosted: Sun, 26th Jun 2005 08:11    Post subject:
well looks fine, what i d do is make the red outline around the 3 images a bit thicker and remove the upper image with the wow logo, seriously.
it is ok if you crop parts of images with environments or characters, but not part of a logo, when letters are missing its too obvious it was cropped out.
instead of the wow logo i d say put in an image of a male human warrior, it would look well as a trinity.
also put a red outline around that middle image, it feels kinda out fo place like this.

EDIT: the alternative version looks a bit better style-wise but is too plain,
if you decide to go with it, remember to fill the eye of the eagle with
the red colour too.


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Accelleron




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PostPosted: Sun, 26th Jun 2005 09:25    Post subject:
hm... I edited both, and made a final large/small version. Tell me what you think.





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m2rock




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PostPosted: Sun, 26th Jun 2005 09:51    Post subject:
The small one looks empty Sad but the big one is pretty cool. Did you try to fill in the red gaps in the small one with maybe some cool design of black lines?
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D_A_Kuja
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PostPosted: Sun, 26th Jun 2005 10:14    Post subject:
yea looks better now with the new image, make the outline around the middle
image a bit thicker so it doesnt look as pixelated as now and its all good.

EDIT: make it the same thickness as the other outlines.


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drakgon




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PostPosted: Sun, 26th Jun 2005 11:15    Post subject:
i would put a picture of one of them summoned deamons in the cinematic into tha black background and return the red of the eagle which was there originaly.
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Griffon
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PostPosted: Mon, 27th Jun 2005 02:30    Post subject:
I like it...
And I don't think you need criticism; if you like it; if your guild members like it, fuck what other people think, especially the 'critics'.


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PostPosted: Mon, 27th Jun 2005 03:46    Post subject:
i dont have anything good to say about it.. so i wont Razz
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[sYn]
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PostPosted: Mon, 27th Jun 2005 09:20    Post subject:
I'm not a fan of the first (either versions of the one with the 3 images) it seems far too overcomplicated to me, as it is only a WOW banner, the seccond I like, it could do with some slight improvements, maybe in colour and the crispness of the lines still but its a good design and looks good as it is.. might post more later.
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Pizda2




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PostPosted: Tue, 28th Jun 2005 15:04    Post subject:
Acc, what is the name of your guild, which server and how many people? do you guys do MC etc?
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