Anyone that can help me correct my german essay?
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Razacka2




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PostPosted: Sun, 23rd May 2010 17:31    Post subject: Anyone that can help me correct my german essay?
So yeah, topic is kind of self-explanatory. I've got an essay that's little more then 1 word A4 page long that I would love if someone could correct. I already mailed/pmed lutz but the paper is due tomorrow and I haven't received a response yet so I'm looking for help elsewhere now. Just need basic correction, grammatically correct etc.

So yeah, if someone could help out I'd appreciate it a lot. just write here in this thread and I'll pm you or just pm me and I'll pm back the essay.

thanks.
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deelix
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PostPosted: Sun, 23rd May 2010 17:33    Post subject:


Short answer, no Sad
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Mr.Tinkles




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PostPosted: Sun, 23rd May 2010 18:00    Post subject:
I got an F my last year of german, so I'd just do more harm than good. Very Happy


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bushwacka




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PostPosted: Sun, 23rd May 2010 18:04    Post subject:
you can PM it to me, german is my mother tongue Wink
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Sin317
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PostPosted: Sun, 23rd May 2010 18:15    Post subject:
and to me aswell
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bushwacka




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PostPosted: Sun, 23rd May 2010 18:35    Post subject:
PMed you the corrected version

btw, you seriosly need to work on grammatical cases and sexes, plus the content is all over the place, i even deleted 2 short sentences cause they made no sense whatsoever
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Sin317
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PostPosted: Sun, 23rd May 2010 18:42    Post subject:
yeah i *corrected* the first paragraph, well, changing it totally is more it ^^
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WaldoJ
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PostPosted: Sun, 23rd May 2010 18:50    Post subject:
wir mussen die jeuden aus rotten
only german i kno
dunno what it means
learned from south park
i use it all the time nowadays
rolls of the tongue Cool Face


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Razacka2




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PostPosted: Sun, 23rd May 2010 18:54    Post subject:
Yeah I know I blow at the language, haven't really spent much time learning it but the corrections you two made have helped a lot. Silly mistakes which I shouldn't have done.

I really appreciate the help guys, thanks.
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ixigia
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PostPosted: Sun, 23rd May 2010 19:02    Post subject:
I could help you spiritually and encourage your work posting some authentic German manpr0n if you want
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