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Posted: Sun, 23rd May 2010 17:31 Post subject: Anyone that can help me correct my german essay? |
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So yeah, topic is kind of self-explanatory. I've got an essay that's little more then 1 word A4 page long that I would love if someone could correct. I already mailed/pmed lutz but the paper is due tomorrow and I haven't received a response yet so I'm looking for help elsewhere now. Just need basic correction, grammatically correct etc.
So yeah, if someone could help out I'd appreciate it a lot. just write here in this thread and I'll pm you or just pm me and I'll pm back the essay.
thanks.
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deelix
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Posted: Sun, 23rd May 2010 18:00 Post subject: |
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I got an F my last year of german, so I'd just do more harm than good. 
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Sin317
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Posted: Sun, 23rd May 2010 18:15 Post subject: |
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Posted: Sun, 23rd May 2010 18:35 Post subject: |
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PMed you the corrected version
btw, you seriosly need to work on grammatical cases and sexes, plus the content is all over the place, i even deleted 2 short sentences cause they made no sense whatsoever
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Sin317
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Posted: Sun, 23rd May 2010 18:42 Post subject: |
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yeah i *corrected* the first paragraph, well, changing it totally is more it ^^
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WaldoJ
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Posted: Sun, 23rd May 2010 18:50 Post subject: |
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wir mussen die jeuden aus rotten
only german i kno
dunno what it means
learned from south park
i use it all the time nowadays
rolls of the tongue 
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Posted: Sun, 23rd May 2010 18:54 Post subject: |
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Yeah I know I blow at the language, haven't really spent much time learning it but the corrections you two made have helped a lot. Silly mistakes which I shouldn't have done.
I really appreciate the help guys, thanks.
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ixigia
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Posted: Sun, 23rd May 2010 19:02 Post subject: |
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I could help you spiritually and encourage your work posting some authentic German manpr0n if you want 
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