Im An Underground Rap Artist :)
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Ishi




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PostPosted: Sun, 20th Nov 2005 18:22    Post subject: Im An Underground Rap Artist :)
Hey peeps check me out on www.soundclick.com/ishi an leave some feedback Smile ty
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fisk




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PostPosted: Sun, 20th Nov 2005 18:36    Post subject:
Generic, boring, and amateurish. Nice try, now please try something different Smile


Yes, yes I'm back.
Somewhat.
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skidrow
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PostPosted: Sun, 20th Nov 2005 18:40    Post subject:
i hear a certain dialect in the singing. You are not from a country were they speak english or you are from the UK. hehe.

Rap/hip hop aint my thing.

when i listen to Politicatabolism, i hear singing about politics, kinda what eminem does. I dont know if its a good or bad thing Wink


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Ishi




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PostPosted: Sun, 20th Nov 2005 19:23    Post subject:
lol kew btw theres 3 people on that track (politicatoblism) i rap first, i dont sing on the tracks... BigG does, thnx anyway
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Ishi




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PostPosted: Sun, 20th Nov 2005 19:24    Post subject:
an yea i am from UK lol Smile
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toeffy
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PostPosted: Sun, 20th Nov 2005 19:38    Post subject:
not as bad as everyone said. but you got to work on and develop an own style.


jesus christ was a gangsta rapper. they killed him. he came back and made a platinum album.
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Ishi




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PostPosted: Sun, 20th Nov 2005 19:49    Post subject:
thanx Very Happy
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PostPosted: Sun, 20th Nov 2005 20:38    Post subject:
I really really didnt enjoy it, but I don't like rap that isnt utterly amazing. You need to get better, but keep it up!
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Mutantius
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PostPosted: Sun, 20th Nov 2005 21:12    Post subject:
I couldnt understand a thing you were saying Sad

Sounded like it was swedish Razz
Though the beat was ok Smile


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SycoShaman
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PostPosted: Mon, 21st Nov 2005 00:25    Post subject:
Sorry to say...but dude, give it up...firstly, the UK accent and rap dont go together (im not trying to be rude, but its true, cuz yall try copying na slang - and it just doesnt work)...secondly, it sounds like u listened to a few of eminem's records, came up with a similar beat and copied his flow...its all about flow and freestyles man.
Just battle ppl, till you can spit some good shit...THEN try writing a song.

Or atleast develop your own style, like UK rap or something. Smile
Im not trying to put u down, but when it comes to the rap "scene"...i know my shit Smile


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PostPosted: Mon, 21st Nov 2005 06:17    Post subject:
Well I think "The Streets are doing ok atm" Wink

Just take this song:

The Irony of It All.

Hello, hello. my names terry and I’m a law abider
There’s nothing I like more than getting fired up on beer
And when the weekends here I to exercise my right to get paralytic and fight
Good bloke fairly
But I get well leery when geezers look at me funny
Bounce ’em round like bunnies
I’m likely to cause mischief
Good clean grief you must believe and I ain’t no thief.
Law abiding and all, all legal.
And who cares about my liver when it feels good
Wwhat you need is some real manhood.
Rasher rasher barney and kasha putting peoples backs up.
Public disorder, I’ll give you public disorder.
I down eight pints and run all over the place
Spit in the face of an officer
See if that bothers you cause I never broke a law in my life
Someday I’m gonna settle down with a wife
Come on lads lets have another fight

Eh hello. my names tim and I’m a criminal,
In the eyes of society I need to be in jail
For the choice of herbs I inhale.
This ain’t no wholesale operation
Just a few eighths and some playstations my’s vocation
I pose a threat to the nation
And down the station the police hold no patients
Let’s talk space and time
I like to get deep sometimes and think about einstein
And carl young and old kung fu movies I like to see
Pass the hydrator please
Yeah I’m floating on thin air.
Going to amsterdam in the new year - top gear there
Cause I taker pride in my hobby
Home made bongs using my engineering degree
Dear leaders, please legalise weed for these reasons.

Like I was saying to him.
I told him: top with me and you won’t leave.
So I smacked him in the head and downed another carling
Bada bada bing for the lad’s night.
Mad fight, his face’s a sad sight.
Vodka and snake bite.
Going on like a right geez, he’s a twat,
Shouldn’t have looked at me like that.
Anyway I’m an upstanding citizen
If a war came along I’d be on the front line with em.
Can’t stand crime either them hooligans on heroin.
Drugs and criminals those thugs on the penny coloured will be the downfall of society
I’ve got all the anger pent up inside of me.

You know I don’t see why I should be the criminal
How can something with no recorded fatalities be illegal
And how many deaths are there per year from alcohol
I just completed gran tourismo on the hardest setting
We pose no threat on my settee
Ooh the pizza’s here will someone let him in please
We didn’t order chicken, not a problem we’ll pick it out
I doubt they meant to mess us about
After all we’re all adults not louts.
As I was saying, we’re friendly peaceful people
We’re not the ones out there causing trouble.
We just sit in this hazy bubble with our quarters
Discussing how beautiful gail porter is.
Mtv, bbc 2, channel 4 is on until six in the morning.
Then at six in the morning the sun dawns and it’s my bedtime.

Causing trouble, your stinking rabble
Boys saying I’m the lad who’s spoiling it
You’re on drugs it really bugs me when people try and tell me I’m a thug
Just for getting drunk
I like getting drunk
Cause I’m an upstanding citizen
If a war came along I’d be on the front line with em.

Now terry you’re repeating yourself
But that’s okay drunk people can’t help that.
A chemical reaction inside your brain causes you to forget what you’re saying.

What. I know exactly what I’m saying
I’m perfectly sane
You stinking student lameo
Go get a job and stop robbing us of our taxes.

Err, well actually according to research
Government funding for further education pales in insignificance
When compared to how much they spend on repairing
Leery drunk people at the weekend
In casualty wards all over the land.

Why you cheeky little swine come here
I’m gonna batter you. come here.


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Ishi




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PostPosted: Mon, 21st Nov 2005 13:59    Post subject:
lol actually BigG made the beat... an that track was his idea, u should take a listen to ma other tracks on there an ull see i do have a diffrent style Smile check out "Good Guy, Bad Guy" and "Times Like This"
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Ishi




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PostPosted: Tue, 24th Jan 2006 06:46    Post subject:
La De Da De Da... My album drops in June 2006 be sure to cop it Wink im actually recording in the studio now, i will update my web page soon Smile
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fruziowy




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PostPosted: Wed, 1st Feb 2006 17:16    Post subject:
n/c rap was fun in the early 90s but now... anyway I HATE IT
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Twi^




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PostPosted: Wed, 1st Feb 2006 20:49    Post subject:
Wheee, good for you.


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